I will be successful when:
- I can plan my ideas before I write
- I can use quick pictures and words
- my writing shows the ideas and details from my plan
When I go back to a story, I might forget so I can turn and look at my plan and remember all my ideas. It helped me think of the special words I wanted to use. The tricky part was trying to use 'flashing' twice. I had to think of a different word so I used 'splash'.
Well done Elisha. Great to see you using some interesting words in your plan. You showed resilience when you kept trying to think of a different word. Ka Pai! Mrs Templeton 10.04.17

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