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Friday, 9 June 2017
Wednesday, 7 June 2017
Welcome to Autumn: Describing the Leaves
Autumn leaves fell all over Elm Park School. This gave us a great idea - using Kidpix to create leaves to illustrate our awesome autumn words.
I am learning to describe autumn leaves:
I used a simile and some 'ing' words. My favourite bit is twirling, swirling because they rhyme
Elisha 04.07.17
Well done Elisha, you did really well with this task. I love the words you used. They really are diamonds and jewels looking so golden. Great job with the simile using like or as too.
Mrs Templeton 04.07.17
I am learning to describe autumn leaves:
- Choose words to add interest (strong verbs 'ing', use a simile,)
I used a simile and some 'ing' words. My favourite bit is twirling, swirling because they rhyme
Elisha 04.07.17
Well done Elisha, you did really well with this task. I love the words you used. They really are diamonds and jewels looking so golden. Great job with the simile using like or as too.
Mrs Templeton 04.07.17
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