Wednesday, 7 June 2017

Welcome to Autumn: Describing the Leaves

Autumn leaves fell all over Elm Park School.  This gave us a great idea - using Kidpix to create leaves to illustrate our awesome autumn words.  

I am learning to describe autumn leaves:

  • Choose words to add interest (strong verbs 'ing', use a simile,)

 I used a simile and some 'ing' words.  My favourite bit is twirling, swirling because they rhyme
Elisha  04.07.17
Well done Elisha, you did really well with this task.  I love the words you used.  They really are diamonds and jewels looking so golden.  Great job with the simile using like or as too.
Mrs Templeton 04.07.17

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