Friday, 24 November 2017

Describing Fireworks

This term we have been learning to:

  • use interesting words
  • use describing words
  • use our senses (what we see, hear, feel etc)
  • use a language feature like:  onomatopoeia, similes




Reflection:  I used some great words to describe the sky with the fireworks.  I used words that sound just like what I could hear.  Next time I could use like or as to make a simile.
Elisha  24.11.17

1 comment:

Mrs Templeton said...

Well done Elisha, what an amazing selection of language features, and your word choices show great resilience, you have really strived for your personal best.